Question

You are a newly appointed tourism secretary of Jammu and Kashmir. Write a letter in about 120 words to the tourism minister on how you propose to bring more tourists to the state.

Answer 1

Hint: The given sentence is a formal sentence. We can know this by reading the first line of the given question. It says 'you are a newly appointed tourism secretary', which makes it obvious to be a business letter.

Complete answer:
30-B
Sector - 6, Mahanagar
Kashmir - 11027
November 09, 2020

The Secretary,
Government of India,
Ministry of Tourism,
New Delhi

Sir,
Subject- Request for improving facilities for tourists in Kashmir
Being heavily concerned about the limited and fragile development of the tourism industry in Kashmir, I would like to draw your attention to the need for improving facilities for tourists to promote tourism in this state.
We all know Kashmir was an important part of tourism in India for a very long time. Unfortunately from the last two decades, there has been a breakdown and turmoil in the state which has largely affected tourism. Since these things have started coming back to normalcy again, I feel that it is the right time for the government to actively engage in promoting this beautiful destination as a favorite tourist spot once again for the people.
Along with making people aware of the beauty of the landscape of the state, mainly through social media, improving the facilities for tourists can be a great help for Kashmir and it’s tourist spots. It would be a good idea to make and enhance the security measures to be built in the areas where people mainly visit so that the idea of feeling unsafe could be deleted off.
I hope the above-mentioned suggestions would help you attract more people to such a beautiful place like Kashmir. I appreciate your patience and would be very thankful if the things I have mentioned could be looked after.
Thanking You,

Yours truly,
Ramesh

Note:
A business letter is a letter from one company to another, or between such organizations and their customers, clients, or other external parties. The overall style of the letter depends on the relationship between the parties concerned.